Hey Guy! I am Karan and this time I am a little serious for a change. I wrote a poem sometime ago about sorrows of life. Its not that good but I somehow like it. Hope you guys like it too.
So here it goes...

I sit here with a broken smile on my face,
Under the shadows of the starry skies.
Filled with sorrow, filled with regret,
Living in the mercy of the pain and the lies.

Slowly the dark clouds cover the sky,
Spreading darkness in my heart,
Slowly the chilling breeze arises,
Slowly tearing me apart.

I stand here frozen and alone,
Waiting for my end.
On who can I trust,
On who can I depend.

What have I done in my entire life,
That I can be proud about,
Have I done anything of that such?
I have a doubt.

I am just an ordinary man,
I am not a super human,
All I want is to freeze in an ice age,
Or burn inside the fires of a thousand sun.

Although I know my family and friends are with me,
I still feel low,
Without any reason,
Just full of regret and sorrow.

Sometimes I laugh at stupid things,
That I have done,
Sometimes I feel alone and lonely,
Does this happen with everyone?

The others seem to be sorted,
Am I so different from the rest,
Is it my destiny,
Or other stupid test.


People never change,
They try to kill me slowly,
But what can I do?
I am just so lonely.


I have finally learnt how to live,
I have finally learnt what does it take,
Now please stop testing me,
Please for god's sake.

I know this poem wasn't funny as most people would expect but I still like it. It reminds me of the sorrows of my life and how can I deal with it. :)

Sincerely,
The CЯAƸY Guy

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Comment by Carlos))) on February 21, 2012 at 12:57pm

This is really good mate! I really like "burn inside the fire of a thousand suns"

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